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Pianissimo Lacrymosa
by Chrysalis
Copyright © chrysalis, 2006
She screams in the loudness of the crowd
Silenced until she lost her voice
Cannot see clearly because of her tears

Trapped in a labyrinth of people
You can show her the way out
All that she needs is you to listen
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Language: English
Category:
Poetry
Date Added:
16th of January 2006, at 2:38 pm
Word Count: 42
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Comment by cky
25th of March 2006, at 5:59 am
(English)
cky
OMG. Best. Title. Ever. :-)

It's hard not to identify with the protagonist, and feel suffocated, smothered, and silenced after reading this…it feels very real. But perhaps I am biased: I write poetry because I feel so unable to articulate myself, and be heard, any other way.
love is an irresistibly seductive vampire; even in shock from the bite, one must thank the creature for the pain with poetry. —jen
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