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Falling
by Jake

She told me she was afraid of f a l l i n g,
and I whispered, "I have wings."

The Best of Lemon Fingers

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This piece was featured on 13th of March 2007 by Shadukha.

"Shadukha's staff pick."

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Language: English

Category:
Poetry

Date Added:
8th of June 2006, at 8:01 pm

Word Count: 22

Favourites: 25

Notes

Just a short little thing.

Piece Rating

14 Ratings

Piece Rating: :lime:

(4.9/5)

Lemon Fingers Seal of Approval

Shadukha's Seal of Approval (5th of March 2007)

This piece has been granted the Lemon Fingers Seal of Approval by the following person:

Shadukha

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This piece can be found within the following Collection:

Poetic Crap

Comments

All comments welcome.

Comment by noxmeansxno
8th of June 2006, at 8:20 pm
(English)

I like it, short and simple, just like that.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by Stiffler
8th of June 2006, at 11:05 pm
(English)

This comment has been hidden by request.

Thanks.

Remember to win in a game of life you must annihilate everything in your path . . . in a blind rage.

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Comment by BurlesqueRevival
9th of June 2006, at 12:29 am
(English)

i like this..
it's soo.
cute.
i suppose that might not fit in most people's views.
but in mine, it does.. cause im a freak.
romantic in a cute way.

"he aimed the shotgun into the blue and placed the face inbetween the two."-- bandits of the acoustic revolution

Comment by Stiffler
9th of June 2006, at 12:40 am
(English)

This comment has been hidden by request.

thanks

Remember to win in a game of life you must annihilate everything in your path . . . in a blind rage.

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Comment by StrangerJeans
11th of June 2006, at 3:34 pm
(English)

aweeeeeee

Item Rating: :lime:

(4/5)

Who am I to be vying for your touch?
Said, Who am I? Bet you can't even tell me that much.

Comment by TwistedAngel
20th of July 2006, at 2:24 pm
(English)

OMG

i'm in love

thats just.. wow so powerful

and sweet

xx Angel xx

.!%!. HoW d0eS iT fEeL tO Be DiFeReNt FrOm Me..? .!%!.

Comment by Shadukha
7th of August 2006, at 1:33 am
(English)

You've got this in the wrong category!

This is brilliant!

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Read something good lately?
Think others should see it too?
Why not send me a Feature Suggestion?

Comment by waterdemon93
23rd of August 2006, at 11:30 pm
(English)

LOOOOVE IT!

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

What should I do??
Im so confused.........

Comment by Sequencing
13th of March 2007, at 11:41 am
(English)

wow.

Comment by shobhnaguerin
13th of March 2007, at 4:18 pm
(English)

Wow. That's incredible.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by WhippedCreamAndGasoline
13th of March 2007, at 5:59 pm
(English)

I hate succumbing, but I might just have to (inwardly).

:pride:

<4
And who says good things don't come in small packages?

I smear my c l i m a x all over the wall
In the ~~halls~~
Of your evening gown ball.

Comment by Omega
25th of March 2007, at 9:34 am
(English)

Simplistic but very beautiful.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by mene92
20th of April 2007, at 8:31 pm
(English)

*likes* It's good. Who knew you were so sweet ;)

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by xKat
28th of June 2007, at 9:26 am
(English)

beautifully done.
so simple yet so layered.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

"I lock my door upon myself,
and bar them out; but who shall wall
self from myself, most loathed of all?"
- Christina Rossetti, 'Who Shall Deliver Me?'

Comment by Litteratura
10th of August 2007, at 12:43 am
(English)

This is amazing! I love it so much.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by psychothicfangirl
7th of October 2007, at 3:49 am
(English)

awsome
i like

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

lets see...i dont care!

Comment by angelkohaku
12th of May 2008, at 10:05 pm
(English)

Aww I really like this.
It's really simple and to me, works on so many levels.
Good work

We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race.

Comment by beegirl17
23rd of July 2008, at 9:13 pm
(English)

awww ! thats so sweet !

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Comment by AxelRoerdan
11th of August 2008, at 9:42 pm
(English)

I think it would be cool if you made the word "falling" fall, like: F
                                                                                                               a
                                                                                                                 l
                                                                                                                  l
                                                                                                                   i
                                                                                                                    n
                                                                                                                     g.
It's a very sweet piece.

"People demand the freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought, which they avoid." - Soren Aabye Kierkegaard

Comment by Jake
11th of September 2008, at 7:23 pm
(English)

Ha. I remember that.

Stiffler was my first account on here, but I use this one now, fyi.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

Jake Phlieger

Comment by insomniac22
6th of October 2008, at 3:48 am
(English)

This is really cool.

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

"If you want to live life on your own terms, you've gotta be willing to crash and burn"

Comment by lalalaurie
31st of December 2009, at 3:47 am
(English)

beautiful

Item Rating: :lime:

(5/5)

"the rain is a necessary prelude to beautiful weather. so even if your heart is in downpour right now... it only means that it will become exceptionally beautiful in time." - Tamaki Suoh

Comment by stellacat
12th of April 2010, at 5:28 pm
(English)