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Spider
by Corey Robinson
Copyright © AlbinoPoetry, 2007
I'm standing outside on the sand
With a pair of scissors in my hand
And I can't wait to say I told you so
I can't wait to show you all my soul
As it's ripped from the inside of me

And I'll be dancing down in hell
With a corpse that is myself
I'm disillusioned yes it's true
To think I fell in love with you
But if I could you know I'd leave

Spider couldn't have her
So spider ran away
But spider couldn't die
So he crawled into a drain
And spider's still there
Just waiting for the rain
Spider doesn't dream
But spider ever waits
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Language: English
Category:
Poetry > Song
Date Added:
10th of March 2007, at 4:35 am
Word Count: 121
Favourites: 2
Notes
Not to anyone, actually. Though I could apply it to a certain gal, I don't. Kay? Kay.
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Comment by HiddenTalent
10th of March 2007, at 4:38 am
(English)
HiddenTalent
Wow....this has that wonderful "touch of creepy" that truely brings out the beauty in your peices.
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Comment by Nisachan666
10th of March 2007, at 3:54 pm
(English)
Nisachan666
creepy. but strangely easy to relate to. i wonder why.
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If you are reading this then this warning is for you. Every word you read of this is useless fine print is another second off your life. Don't you have other things to do? Is your life so empty that you honestly can't think of a better way to spend these moments? Or are you so impressed with authority that you give respect and credence to all who claim it? Do you read everything you're supposed to read? Do you think everything you're supposed to think? Buy what you're told you should want? Get out of your apartment. Meet a member of the opposite sex. Stop the excessive shopping and masturbation. Quit your job. Start a fight. Prove you're alive. If you don't claim your humanity you will become a statistic. You have been warned... - Tyler Durden, Fight Club
Comment by browneyedbabe
14th of March 2007, at 4:19 pm
(English)
browneyedbabe
i really like this....
*hugs*
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"Oh you don't mean nothing at all to me
No you don't mean nothing at all to me
Do you got what it takes to set me free
Oh you could mean everything to me..."

-say it right-
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